Tuesday, March 04, 2008

VOIDEN The Last of the Hybridtrons Part 1

"An oppressed people struggle to rid themselves of the rein of terror imposed on them by Voiden with the help of a small group of mercenaries lead by Indigo, the last of the Hybridtrons, a military cyborg race now permanently banned from Voiden. This is a Saga rooted in the tradition of Star Wars, Lord of the Rings or even Star Trek, more episodes are coming, so sit and enjoy!"


The animator, Alfredo, has been in the industry for 20+ years.

Great Cell Shading. Overall good animation. Great effects!

Thoughts on improvement (because he asked):
- Vehicle movement could be faster and snappier.
- Walking could be smoother and more fluid.
- Pull the voices up and the sound/music down.
- New voice actors. Great voice effects on your emperor, but every other voice should be replaced in your sequel with professional actors. I can help you get them for free if you want.
- Make the first line in the description say: This is exclusive for YouTube.

Overall: If you got the voices/sound mixed better, new voice actors, and mention that it is exclusive to YouTube then this could have been featured (or perhaps the sequel can be).

Great job, Alfredo!

Take the animation advice with a grain of salt, though. You'll find that several of our animations aren't perfect and also have characters that are "wonky," a little "floaty," or "slide" at parts. That's the nature of the beast. You have to ship it sometime. LOL

However, we do have one we're finishing where we have "fully refined" the animation.

Here's another positive on Voiden: This is the best Poser I've ever seen, made even better with the cell shading. Great job!


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